The green grass grows underneath me
As i sit on on my freshly mowed lawn.
The warm air sweeps across my face
And my mind wanders into the rustling green leaves
The azalea bush behind me,
bursting with loud hot pink petals.
The birds sing sweet songs as
They flutter and fly from tree to tree.
I lay back and look at the sky
As the sounds of spring sing to me.
In my poem, I used sibilance, euphony, alliteration, and personification.
I like how you used euphony in your poem to demonstrate the mood. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you used sibilance and euphony together because it makes the overall flow of the poem nice. I think tying in the alliteration with that caused to make this a great poem. Good job.
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