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     Sarah was woken abruptly by the sound of her alarm. The sun didn't shine through her bedroom window like it always did when her alarm clock sounded. The clock read five-thirty in the morning, and that's when Sarah remembered that she was leaving for Italy today! She sprang out of bed, careful not to trip over her overflowing suitcase she had packed a week in advance. She brushed her teeth and put on her outfit she had laid out the night before. The time had finally come to load up in the car, and Sarah and her family drove to the airport. The roads were almost empty, and the sun had started to rise behind the buildings they drove by. She grew more and more excited with every passing minute. Once Sarah and her family arrived at the airport, she was bursting with excitement. She marched through the sliding doors with her passport in hand, and she knew this would be the best week of her life.

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  1. serynOctober 1, 2017 at 4:17 PM

    this was a great story, the way you write is very organized. Also, you have good vivid imagery.

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  2. CadeOctober 2, 2017 at 12:56 PM

    This story is very organized and had a lot of detail. Good job

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  3. julianaOctober 3, 2017 at 7:33 AM

    Your story is well-developed and uses lots of detail. I really like how organized your short story is. Good job!

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  4. EmmaOctober 5, 2017 at 12:12 PM

    This is such a good story and you had awesome detail. Good post!!

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