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Personal Narrative

       My personal narrative explores my childhood from my point of view as a first grader. I tell the story of a normal fall day after school, and I describe the different games that we play together. I am excited about my narrative because I think the point of view is interesting. You can see the vivid imagination of a seven year old through my story, and the reader can also see how playing games in the front yard seems like the most important thing in the world. Another thing I like about my narrative is that it is very descriptive. I try to explain emotions and places with great detail, so it feels like the reader is actually there.

       Something I am worried about for my narrative is the significance. I know that the significance relates to me as a person, but it may not resonate with people like it does with me. I am also slightly worried about my word choice. I am trying to balance vivid detail with the perfect words to fit my emotions. I hope to read over my paper soon with an encyclopedia at hand and change some words to fit the emotion or place perfectly. Overall, I am excited about my narrative, but I will defiantly use time to revise it.

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