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Concert

       This summer, my family and I went on a huge road trip to North Carolina and Washington DC. While we were in the car, we always listened to John Mayer's new album, the Search for Everything. As we listened to it more and more, my whole family started to really love it, and we associated it with our summer. We would listen to it in the car, at cook outs, and just around the house.

       As our summer came to an end, my mom asked us if we wanted to go to his concert. I wasn't super excited about it because it was the night before orientation day, so I decided not to go. School was nearing and my sister, Emily, was so excited for the concert, but I didn't want summer to end. The day before orientation day, I went to go get a hair cut, and when I was done it was around 4 pm. My mom asked my on the way home, "Do you want to go to the John Mayer concert?" I was so confused because my sister was about to leave in thirty minutes, and I didn't know how it was possible. I decided I should have fun on my last day of summer, so I got ready as fast as I could and drove to New Orleans.

       The last time I went to a concert was in the sixth grade, so I forgot how exciting the environment felt. The arena was dim and everyone was ready for the lights to go out and for the music to start. When it began, everyone around me and I was thrilled. The music was fantastic, and it was a great way to end my summer.

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  1. wow! You're so lucky! Good word choice and idea flow.

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  2. It seems like you had a great time at the concert! I like how you described the exciting environment of the concert.

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  3. This sounds so exciting! I like how you mentioned the concert environment. Its also interesting that you didn't want to go but you ended up going anyway, nice details!

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